A completely updated chapter 1 (draft 3) based on feedback and continuous re-reading trying to find faults. A little more detail, a little more directness, a little more polish. The draft number after the title will key you into updates of the material as they occur.
Chapter 2 (draft 1) introduces my other main character, Hieronymus the mage. Hieronymus has some mystery about him and an entirely different story arc to work through.
Working on Chapters 3 and 4 and hope to have them ready to share by the weekend if everything works as planned. IE, I get enough time during the week to finish a couple of missing sections and to edit what I already have to make them more seamless with chapters 1 and 2.
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